First Draft by Georgia





Feedback –
-Camera movement, First person POV, Monster’s POV and security cams.
-Cut CPR dummy car scene (have it laying down in a background in the hospital), keep the deer omen scene.
-Move the beginning computer room scene to the end. (?)
Begin with Cad filming an intro to his video, taking multiple versions.
-Previous victims of the Wolf, the masks hoarded in their den. Might also have magazine cut outs. (The ward room)
-Cad’s vanity and the Wolf’s vanity (when it was a patient) parallels each other.
-Unspoken rules of Urbanex, Don’t steal/vandalise what’s there, Don’t share location etc. and how Cad breaks them
Setting:
2010-2014 (Early YouTube Career, not quite the age of ‘influencer’ but the beginning of it)
Camera recorder or Phone
Character Motivations:
CAD-
Arrogant, explores abandoned places for clout/ fame. When he gets scared he brushes it off by playing around. (‘scares’ the audience, loud and obnoxious)
WEREWOLF-
Wolf communicates non-verbally. (grunts, growls, hand gestures)
Ape-like intelligence and dexterity/can use tools. Has memories of being human.
Points at Cad then to its face, before distorting it to match Cad’s expressions. (mockingly, but also reflects its desire to become human)
Motivation for wearing masks is to deceive prey and to become ‘human’ like it once was.
Updated version of script – by Georgia




